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Let Go 

 

Let go of my hand
Let me be what I want to be
Let go of my hand
The sands of time Are trickling before me
I have not yet Achieved
what I want to be
Let go of my hand
I want to stand alone
In a sea of words
Pluck out the phrases
Soar like a bird
I want to stand on a mountain
Wait for the dawn
Yet be aware of
The approaching storm
I want to fashion a rainbow
That arcs through the sky
And iron out the dilemmas
Between you & I 

Analysing:

" Let go of my hand

Let me ben what I want to be 

Let go of my hand"

 

Repetition - This describes the state of mind that the poet is in.

Tone - A sens of despiration / plea to white poeople.

Effect:

  • This shows how the indigenous people want to out their own feelings.

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" The sands of time are trickling before me

I have not yet achieved

what I want to be"

 

Personification - Adding a human factor to " sand" 

Effect:

  • This creates a more open state of mind, that the indigenous people want more time and more freedom. 

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" I want to stand alone

In a sea of words

pluck out the phrases

 

Metaphors - This shows that the indigenous people want to only think of the good things that have / going to happen. 

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" Soar like a bird"

 

Simile - This acknowledges the imperfections of the indigenous people. 

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" I want to fashion a rainbow 

And Iron out the dillemmas 

beetween you & I

 

 

Metaphor - With the Iron he wants to straight out all the probelms so they get passed away. 

Repetition - " I want to" which indicates that he wants to change all his problems. 

Effect:

  • This can create doubt in the perscpective of the white. 

  • This addresses the white. 

 

 

 

On a final note, the poet creates highlighting, emotional connection the indigenous people have to their land, how strong they handel it. White settlement invasion destroyed all that the indigenous people had. 

 

 

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